Omg it came out great! 🥰 Knowing the character art you were working with, I love how you made so many edits to match the story! Lumi was a precious little cinnamon roll in Skye's arms. I really liked the music choices and sound effects. The background assets were perf, too. Lots of color coordination all around. Thanks so much for collabing!
Thanks! It sucks that I couldn't submit it into the game jam in time, but for a visual novel of this size and scope, I think I worked on it and released it at a reasonable time considering everything that went involved in the making of it. I wasn't just color coordinating the backgrounds and characters but the game menu and the page for the game itself! If you notice, the characters start off gray, become grayer, and then become colorful in conjunction to the rising and falling events of the story. I thought that was a neat touch. Artistically and storytelling-wise, I thought this visual novel turned out great! As for the music and sound effects, they could have been overused in some places, but I didn't want to seek out further assets. Thus, I used my own in more places than not, which either weren't the correct sound effect for the sound it was describing, or they were drowned out by the music, I found, anyway. Regardless, I give this VN a solid 8.5/10. This one is definitely leagues beyond better than my usual ones, and I'm glad how it turned out. I'm so glad and relieved you like this just as much! That's all that matters to me, but I also let the other creators know I used their assets for this particular VN, too, as that's why they made those assets—for other people to use! All in all, you were awesome to collaborate and work with, too! Thank you for your patience, hard work, and feedback as well! I'm always willing to collab in the future.
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Omg it came out great! 🥰 Knowing the character art you were working with, I love how you made so many edits to match the story! Lumi was a precious little cinnamon roll in Skye's arms. I really liked the music choices and sound effects. The background assets were perf, too. Lots of color coordination all around. Thanks so much for collabing!
Thanks! It sucks that I couldn't submit it into the game jam in time, but for a visual novel of this size and scope, I think I worked on it and released it at a reasonable time considering everything that went involved in the making of it. I wasn't just color coordinating the backgrounds and characters but the game menu and the page for the game itself! If you notice, the characters start off gray, become grayer, and then become colorful in conjunction to the rising and falling events of the story. I thought that was a neat touch. Artistically and storytelling-wise, I thought this visual novel turned out great! As for the music and sound effects, they could have been overused in some places, but I didn't want to seek out further assets. Thus, I used my own in more places than not, which either weren't the correct sound effect for the sound it was describing, or they were drowned out by the music, I found, anyway. Regardless, I give this VN a solid 8.5/10. This one is definitely leagues beyond better than my usual ones, and I'm glad how it turned out. I'm so glad and relieved you like this just as much! That's all that matters to me, but I also let the other creators know I used their assets for this particular VN, too, as that's why they made those assets—for other people to use! All in all, you were awesome to collaborate and work with, too! Thank you for your patience, hard work, and feedback as well! I'm always willing to collab in the future.